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A Gasfelt Bond (Commission - Chapter 2)

Patty had matched with a handsome Portuguese man named Alberto from Tinder. They had gone back and forth a bit picking out a good place to eat. She liked how he was brimming with ideas and didn’t seem like the type to sit back and let her do all...

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A Gasfelt Bond (Commission - Chapter 1)

Patty looked around as she stepped on the porch of the quaint old store that was squeezed between an art gallery and a candle store. Hopetown was popular for its downtown full of interesting and…eclectic shops. They had fortune tellers, creeper ...

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What do you think of the pacing in my writing?

I'm curious and wanted to throw this question out there. Overall, do you feel like things could get to the point faster with the burps and farts and other fetish scenes? Just the right pace? Or have my stories been too much of a slow burn for you?...

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Gamer Girl Gas - Chapter 3 (Commission)

The tournament ended with Joe beating Jacob. Overall, their growing rivalry was more or less equal at that point. Joe blushed when Amanda was the loudest person in the room rooting for him. She took notice that few people matched her energy so she...

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Gamer Girl Gas (Commission - Chapter 2 - FOR REAL THIS TIME)

Joe made sure to go to bed before Luke came back from the party. He knew he was being a coward but he wanted to avoid any uncomfortable conversations with him about Amanda. Then again, Luke could have been too drunk to remember. That would have be...

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Gamer Girl Gas (Commission - Chapter 2)

Joe made sure to go to bed before Luke came back from the party. He knew he was being a coward but he wanted to avoid any uncomfortable conversations with him about Amanda. Then again, Luke could have been too drunk to remember. That would have be...

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Gamer Girl Gas (Commission - Chapter 1)

Hey everyone! I know I'm late with stuff. Ever since I got sick back in February I lost the rhythm, but trust me when I say I'm working on stuff. There's a lot on my backlog and since this is the last year of my patreon I figured I'll just mar...

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back to work

Quick update. I was sick for a while there but I've fully recovered now. Expect more posts this week!

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A Study in Gas - Ch. 4 (Jan 2025)

It took almost a month, but Margo was 90% sure she had caught the attention of the “mad gasser”. Margo at first was not prepared for the amount of direct messages with other men who flocked to her. Like most things, the fart fetish community w...

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A Study in Gas - Ch. 3 (Jan 2025)

Margo had been to only two libraries before realizing this was getting tedious and probably not going to work. People often thought finding someone in security camera footage was an easy thing. It wasn’t. If you don’t have a specific date to g...

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A Study in Gas - Ch. 2 (January 2025)

Tisha Reems took about a week to fully recover from her bloated state. Despite this, she clearly suffered from random explosive bouts of flatulence – far louder than normal. This proved to be quite awkward during the interview.

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A Study in Gas - Ch. 1 (January 2025)

Never in her twenty years working on the force did Detective Margo Layne see something this weird. It was not grotesque, it was not bloody, it was not even murder. Just plain fucking weird.

        &nb...

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February 2025 Story Submissions

I will be starting January commissions this week. If I liked your comment that means I'm doing it. If you posted multiple ideas, I will be messaging you about which one. I'm doing a couple private commissions too.

Comment below what you wa...

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edit to tiers

Hey all,

Quick notice. I edited the tiers. Since everyone will be able to submit writing requests each month for 2025, Discord access has been bumped to exclusively the $3 and $5 tiers. This will NOT AFFECT anyone who joined already in the...

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Office Christmas Party - Ch. 4 (Final) (Dec. 2024)

(Like the last original story, I consider this a demo run. I have in mind a set of stories taking place in the same workplace over the course of several years following different characters coming and going until the place shuts down. So I kno...

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Office Christmas Party - Ch. 3 (Dec. 2024)

The community fridge upstairs was so stuffed with food that Zach almost wasn’t able to fit the three 2L bottles of Coke he bought. It wasn’t until he angled a vegetable tray sideways that he was able to finally fit everything.

 &nbs...

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Office Christmas Party - Ch. 2 (Dec. 2024)

With three days to go until the party, Zach made sure he looked and felt good about himself. He upped his time at the gym and cut back on sugars (they tended to swell up his face). He was on the lookout during lunchtime for Jeanine again. He typic...

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Office Christmas Party - Ch. 1 (Dec. 2024)

(Unimaginative title, I know. Whatever. Works for now. Read on.)

Office Christmas parties could either be the bane of one’s existence or a completely wild and fun time. Zach Harbor had only experienced the former. At his old job,...

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everyone gets a say for the final months of this patreon! (january 2025 requests)

All right folks...

So I decided that I will be ending this patreon by the end of June 2025.

For these final months, I will be allowing everyone to be able to submit requests regardless of their tiers.

BUT ALSO ...

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Pig Mom - Ch. 3 (Final) (November 2024)

I started to think I overstayed my welcome. Chris was not happy at all. We hung out in the basement for the rest of that hour. With the editing done and the video ready for our presentation, there wasn’t anything to do except hang out. Chris tho...

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Pig Mom - Ch. 2 (November 2024)

We filmed our skit in one go. Chris ordered pizza for us for dinner, and I had hoped we would eat with Janet as a family but apparently, she and her husband had already eaten dinner earlier, which struck me as odd. More on that later. I was too di...

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Pig Mom - Ch. 1 (November 2024)

            I don’t know if you’ve ever seen the movie The Matrix Reloaded but there’s this one scene where Neo is fighting the Merovingian’s henchmen in a fa...

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Escape Room Rumble - Ch. 5 (Final) (October 2024)

The final room began with darkness…much like the first. Yor wondered what could possibly be waiting for them this time, and she gripped Loid’s arm wondering if something would scare her.

Slowly, the lights lit up the room, though not bri...

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Escape Room Rumble - Ch. 4 (October 2024)

Loid checked his watch. “25 minutes left to beat the record. Think we can do it?”

            Yor honestly wanted to pass out in shame. She was so deep in thoughts of failure th...

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Escape Room Rumble - Ch. 3 (October 2024)

The next room had a giant bank vault door standing before them. At the center of the door was a large combination lock with numbers ranging from 1 to 99. Loid seemed amused by this puzzle and put on his gloves. He went up to the lock and pressed h...

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Escape Room Rumble - Ch. 2 (October 2024)

The next room did appear homey. It had been set up to look like an old timey office with real wood furniture, a desk with many drawers, a fireplace (also real, to their surprise) with a mantle, a deer’s head above the mantle, a coat rack, a larg...

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Escape Room Rumble - Ch. 1 (October 2024)

            The building looked a little creepy stuck between two bustling stores. Yor Forger wasn’t sure at first if this was the right address, but Loid confirmed it was.

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Fart Face - Ch. 4 (Final) (September 2024)

Jenny gussied up in front of the bathroom mirror. She had put on eyeliner and panicked slowly over which hairstyle looked best on her. Ponytail? Half-up-half-down? All down? She hadn’t worried about her appearance in a very long time, so this fe...

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Fart Face - Ch. 3 (September 2024)

This was the strangest bet Jenny had ever made, and that was saying something. Back in college there were bets to take off each other’s clothes, sit on each other’s faces, run around the dorm naked without getting caught. But like she already ...

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Fart Face - Ch. 2 (September 2024)

Minor edit: In the first chapter, I rewrote it so that Jenny didn't eat yet and instead burped on command to push away those two annoying fans. So this chapter starts with her first dish. 

The woman’s name was Elaine Hale. A...

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