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The Vast Gap Between Us pg 6 draft (script)

P1: Zerina pats the spot next to her. She grins, revealing her large, sharp teeth.

ZERINA: There's a great view of the river right here next to me.

P2: Xander doesn't look too keen to join.

XANDER: Oh. Uh, cool. Thanks, Zerina. ...

Helluva Trio 2 pg 7 (commentary)

Finally, some new colors! Though, it'll be short-lived for awhile.

I just realized I forgot to move the speech bubble in the first panel. I'll have to move it so you can see the car streaks better and then re-upload.

The Vast Gap Between Us pg 1 draft

It's time we get this comic started.

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Helluva Trio 2 pg 8 inks (commentary)

Callback to the first issue and Millie and Moxxie's first appearance. But now Loona is on the other side of the door.

Moxxie continues his ability to notice other people's emotions a little bit better than Millie, but he's not particularly g...

Helluva Trio 2 pg 6 (commentary)

A superfluous page, but a fun one. Just something to show how the trio has quickly become okay with spending a morning together and getting ready for work, perhaps hinting at a future where this becomes typical.

Loona has also that deep swa...

Helluva Trio 2 pg 8 draft (script)

P1: Millie slams open the door to the office.

MILLIE: Aha! See, we made it in time!

P2: Blitz is in the lobby, drinking a coffee and looking over a clipboard.

BLITZ: Oh, good. Millie and fuckboi are here. Did you happen to see Lo...

Helluva Trio pg 105 draft

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Helluva Trio 2 pg 7 inks (commentary)

Man, I really hate drawing vehicles. I guess the only way to work on that is by drawing more vehicles in the future.

It's fun drawing stupid expressions on Loona. It feels like drawing Minerva Mink from Looney Tunes, this hyper-sexualized, v...

Helluva Trio 2 pg 5 (commentary)

I mean, if you're first time is gonna be with something the size of a zucchini, it's gonna hurt the day after.

The next scene is going to be the characters at the office, so I had to put as many sexy shots here and now in order to still get ...

Helluva Trio pg 104 inks

Helluva Trio 2 pg 6 inks (commentary)

An aaaaalmost but not quite work-safe page.

This turned out vastly different from what I had written in the script. The original idea was to emulate that meme of a girl applying makeup on another girl while laying on top of her. But there re...

Helluva Trio 2 pg 7 draft (script)

P1: The trio are in the van, driving to work, with Moxxie driving. Loona is in the backseat, looking very uncomfortable.

MOXXIE: Ugghh, we’re cutting it awfully close again.

MILLIE: Speed up! Speed up!

P2: Loona is hunched ove...

Helluva Trio 2 pg 4 (commentary)

There are no shots of Moxxie and Millie's bathroom, so I just kinda based it on my own. A bit uninspired, no real Hellish imagery. Sorry about that, but when you're on a deadline, it's hard to be creative.

Helluva Trio 2 pg 3 (commentary)

Oh, boy. Getting a little nervous.

Gotta plant the seeds here in the first few pages so we can fully appreciate how events and characters will change by the end of the story.

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Helluva Trio 2 pg 5 inks (commentary)

Y'know, something I rarely see in hentai doujins is just how sore you are after sex, especially if you're going crazy and having mind-blowing orgasms left and right.

You might be walking weird or having trouble sitting down. And Loona, being...

Helluva Trio 2 pg 6 draft (script)

P1: Montage shots. Millie is brushing her teeth while Moxxie hands Loona a toothbrush.

P2: We see the characters getting dressed.

P3: Millie helps Loona apply her makeup.

P4: The three walk out of the house, heading to work.

The Vast Gap Between Us pg 5 inks (script)

P1: Sylara gets up and hugs Ares, lifting him up in a tight embrace.

SYLARA: Ares! You made it!

ARES: Just getting supplies for everyone.

P2: Zerina looks around Ravinn to waves at Xander.

ZERINA: Xander! I didn't know you ...

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Helluva Trio 2 pg 2 (commentary)

As I was writing the script to this comic, I had to keep looking for opportunities to add naughty moments while still feeling natural.

This moment was funny because I was intentionally going for an unnatural moment to have something naughty....

Helluva Trio 2 pg 4 inks (commentary)

Loona instantly realizes that she might've screwed up already. So it's time to adjust the plan... despite not having one.

Trying out a new brush starting with this page. Hopefully the lines won't look so crispy from now on.

Helluva Trio 2 pg 5 draft (script)

P1: Loona spreads her legs, gingerly rubbing her pussy.

LOONA (thoughts): Fuuckk... it feels like my cooch is one giant bruise!

P2: Sweating, Loona leans against the sink counter.

LOONA (thoughts): It's because of Moxxie's fuckin...

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Helluva Trio pg 103 draft

Forgot to post this one today. Sorry about that.

Helluva Trio 2 pg 4 draft (script)

P1: Loona is in the bathroom, frustrated.

LOONA (thoughts): Fuck. That was a mistake, wasn't it?

P2: She walks over, about to sit on the toilet.

LOONA (thoughts): I don't want things to end like this. There's got to be some way t...

Helluva Trio 2 pg 1 (commentary)

Already, with the double meanings? On page 1?

With a new chapter, some new coloring techniques.

I've changed Loona's darker fur to be a little more accurate to the show design. I changed the texture I use for backgrounds to be a little...

Helluva Trio 2 pg 3 inks (commentary)

Millie is starting to worry that she might be a bad influence. To be clear, she's not really the time to jump to blaming others, so by "a mistake," she's wondering if maybe she did something wrong, somehow.

When I drew them together in that ...

The Vast Gap Between Us pg 4 inks (script)

P1: Sylara smiles proudly to herself.

SYLARA: But we're taking her to the record store first. I'm going to introduce my favorite bands to her. I want her to be able to relax while she's with us and who can do that better than the late, great...