Mirage’s PoV – Eyrarháls – Mid-morning to mid-afternoon Second Day
The morning had seen the cadre’s compound awash with faithful whose shock had worn off. While the initial surge of Ebusuku’s presence—somehow fe...
2022-05-20 07:31:57 +0000 UTC View PostIsa – Outlands – Evening First Day
The ordinarily calm wind of the Outlands echoed strangely across the chasm. Its clean-cut sides looked like someone had scooped hundreds of kilometres out with a laser cutter. Here and ...
2022-05-17 21:18:20 +0000 UTC View Post197 - Editing (it's a long chapter so will take a bit - 8.3k when I finished writing it tonight)
198 - Set out and filling in sections at present
2022-05-15 12:31:05 +0000 UTC View PostAggie’s PoV – Thebes
“No!”
At Aggie’s shout, Alfarr dropped the Manes’ copper amulet and it cluttered across the craft master’s stone table. The rest of the group turned in surprise, a rush of motion havi...
2022-05-13 22:31:06 +0000 UTC View PostAmdirlain’s PoV – Limbo – Monastery of Will’s Hand
With the marks handed out, the guest examiners filed from the training hall, leaving the class to clean up the ritual circle. When the door clicked shut only Lezekus...
2022-05-12 20:13:42 +0000 UTC View PostCurrently working on editing: 195
Which isn't the chapter I had originally intended.
In re-writing the Aggie PoV I had intended 195 to be, the chapter ended up feeling weird. While working it over, I realised that a lot of the co...
2022-05-11 11:58:43 +0000 UTC View PostElliyna’s PoV - Limbo - Monastery of Will’s Hand.
“Weren’t you going to skip their rematch this time?” asked Duurth, as he sat down next to Elliyna. Her now dark black hair and smooth skin made it look as if he was...
2022-05-10 19:12:19 +0000 UTC View PostEbusuku’s PoV - Outlands - Domain
The nearest streamers of light rising throughout the Domain wipe away all shadows from my scroll. A glance across the tallies reminds me of when we’d gone from keeping count in companies...
2022-05-07 20:28:01 +0000 UTC View PostSo that happened...
Having a bit of fun with the software I use for writing at present. I've used an online version for a while so I don't have to worry about backing up (so I thought), and so I can get the documents from various locations. ...
2022-05-06 22:35:07 +0000 UTC View PostMirage’s PoV - Cemna
Sage picked another gloomy location for a regroup point, on the edge of a petrified forest where the pebble-strewn beach extends into the mainland behind us. Out on the central isle of the crescent bay...
2022-05-06 22:17:32 +0000 UTC View PostBalnérith’s PoV - Ijmti - Sisterhood Stronghold
Deep beneath the stronghold was a chamber that only one entity still in existence had seen. There was no flat surface anywhere in the room, though its artificial constructio...
2022-05-03 08:42:24 +0000 UTC View PostLezekus’ PoV - Limbo - Monastery of Will’s Hand
Crossing the Portal’s threshold brought a sigh of relief from Lezekus and she stepped to the side. It wasn’t an action needed by protocol but prompted by concern given ...
2022-05-01 05:18:57 +0000 UTC View PostCurrent chapters in-progress (main PoVs)
190 - Lezekus (start of 2nd year)
191 - Balnérith
192 - Mirage - being summoned by the Daughters
193 - Ebusuku (end of next year - starts with reviewing reports)
194 - Elliyna...
2022-04-29 23:31:58 +0000 UTC View PostCurrently,my brain has me bouncing around between ideas for 12 chapters (was only 11 when I started writing this status)
190 - 50% written
191 - 50% written
192 - Started - main points set out filled in some sections
193 - ...
2022-04-29 23:25:33 +0000 UTC View PostLivia’s PoV - Limbo - Monastery of Will’s Hand
Between time spent talking and training together, the five days I promised Eb I wouldn’t exceed passed quickly. Finding myself in an outer courtyard on the receiving end o...
2022-04-28 03:22:05 +0000 UTC View PostErwarth’s PoV - Tunnels of Ternòx
Since their entrapment, the Grottos’ music has stayed synchronised to the planar wheel instead of the night sky. Each one’s music rings out with subtle differences, countering the loc...
2022-04-24 11:09:21 +0000 UTC View Post188 - 45% written (Erwarth)
189 - started (Livia)
(I've also got a couple of future chapters that wouldn't leave me alone written - but need to work on them a bit more. No idea what chapter numbers they'll be as yet, but my brain...
2022-04-20 14:18:15 +0000 UTC View PostThe northern lights danced across the sky, greens with hints of red. It's a sight that I remember from my Mortal life. Yet it's like so many things; it's the same but different. On that trip, I’d needed a digital SLR to see them so distinctly; h...
2022-04-20 01:15:05 +0000 UTC View PostLivia’s PoV - Limbo - Monastery of Will’s Hand
The third bowl Amdirlain hands me looks like it contains a lumpy fist-sized hunk of river mud. “What flavour is this?”
“Double choc fudge,” says Amdirlain, alr...
2022-04-19 02:25:22 +0000 UTC View Post187 and Chained - 16 are both at 50%.
188 - Will be another Erwarth PoV - I just started this morning.
Spent a lot of time this week reviewing early chapters and started work on re-writing Emerging.
The first twenty-five ch...
2022-04-15 02:56:30 +0000 UTC View PostEbusuku’s PoV - Outlands.
For whatever reasons the Domain has continued to expand away from Amdirlain’s overlook, instead of in all directions. Blue and golden lights streamed upwards through the trees behind me, and amo...
2022-04-14 07:00:03 +0000 UTC View PostAmdirlain’s PoV - Limbo - Monastery of Will’s Hand
Holding her at arm’s length, Amdirlain gave Livia a beaming smile before waggling a finger at her. “I told you I was here healing.”
“Eb told me you were do...
2022-04-11 07:00:04 +0000 UTC View PostMy brain was jumping around again this weekend, so between it and family commitments, this weekend didn't hit 100% with any single chapter.
185 - nearly ready - editing to do. Amdirlain's PoV. Should be ready for release before the nex...
2022-04-10 08:53:12 +0000 UTC View PostSome prey is the most thrilling challenge, especially in desperate times seasoned by hunger. So much depends on my success today. I’m up for the hunt, but there will only be one chance.
Slowly creeping forward, I freeze as a breeze tickles...
2022-04-09 09:01:59 +0000 UTC View PostSarith’s PoV - Limbo - Monastery of Will’s Hand
The gathering in the outer courtyard was clear from several buildings away because of the dozens clustered close in silence. Their presence blocked her view so that it was ...
2022-04-08 22:31:18 +0000 UTC View PostSoranus’s PoV - Aegina - Paláti of Apollo
Letting the door shut behind him, Soranus walked along each of the four rows of workbenches. At each station, he checked the piece being worked on with a glance. A few he gave ins...
2022-04-07 08:23:01 +0000 UTC View PostChained - 15 has been released so Chained - 10 and earlier is now available for Ascended Tier.
The crunching of ice and snow underfoot while I move in the already fading sunlight sets an odd sensation across my skin. Memories of snow trips, home and abroad, icy wind scouring flesh, and the welcome warmth of the ski lodge’s fireplace.
<... 2022-04-04 18:25:13 +0000 UTC View PostMy brain was skipping between ideas this weekend, so my current writing progress is at:
Chapter 183 - 75%
Chapter 184 - 45%
Chapter 185 - 30%
Plus a future chapter that wouldn't get out of my brain, so I had to write it. Th...
2022-04-03 23:07:47 +0000 UTC View PostAmdirlain’s PoV - Limbo - Monastery of Will’s Hand
Elliyna’s door opened to reveal a room nearly empty of its usual clutter of furnishings.
“Leaving already?”
“Know I wished to be pac...
2022-04-02 12:42:37 +0000 UTC View Post