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Miriam and Seraphina on a Serenelle (Gondola)

Chapter 1 of book 2.

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TO&FQ: Book 3: Chapter 7 (RAW)

Chapter 7 - The Price of Progress

If there is no struggle, there is no progress.

- Frederick Douglass.

Seraphina drained the last of her flagon, the dwarven brew thick and earthy on her tongue. ...

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Seraphina with Istala

Seraphina and the beggar girl

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Book 6: Chapter 22 - A Contest of Blades (RAW)

The heartbeat of risk is where true growth lives.

- The Manifold Paths Of Wisdom from the Land of Streams.

It did not take long to find a suitable place—after all, we were surrounded by nothing but desert. Ti...

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TO&FQ: Book 3: Chapter 6 (RAW)

Chapter 6 - Undertown

Far and away the best prize that life has to offer is the chance to work hard at work worth doing.

- Theodore Roosevelt.

With a change of horses at every major town, Seraph...

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Book 6: Chapter 21 - The Blind Swordsman (RAW)

A weak people are the sign of a strong society.

- Attributed to the First Tamkar of the Sultanate of Al-Lazar.

Outside the glow of the city lights, the nights stretched out like tapestries of stars, so many scattered ...

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TO&FQ: Book 3: Chapter 5 (RAW)

Chapter 5 - An Opportunity

Unraveling external selves and coming home to our real identity is the true meaning of soul work.

- Sue Monk Kidd.

It was, by every sensible measure, a leisurely journ...

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Book 6: Chapter 20 - A New Journey (RAW)

The heart of a woman is unfathomable only if you are not one yourself.

- Attributed to the playwright Vlan di Panoli

“Yesterday is finished, tomorrow has yet to arrive, and today remains an unknown.” Among the des...

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Gilgamesh's Status, forgot to put it one of the chapters.

These are his latest skills, stats, and xp. Gifts remain the same. Patreon wasn't playing nice with tables for a while.

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TO&FQ: Book 3: Chapter 4 (RAW)

Chapter 4 - A Return to Normalcy

Life isn't about finding yourself. Life is about creating yourself. 

- George Bernard Shaw.

Dawn broke over the broken ruins of Milani Village, its pale lig...

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Dragon Balalazanga (initial sketch)

Last Boss of Book 2 TO&FQ

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Book 6: Chapter 19 - The Mercenaries

“In the far future, if the bards yet sing of this age, they shall not sing of heroes and radiant virtue. They shall sing of men broken by fate, of crowns reforged from chains, and of justice drowned in blood. They shall not sing of a saviour...

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TO&FQ: Book 3: Chapter 3 (RAW)

Chapter 3 - The Fires of Rage

“Anger is an acid that can do more harm to the vessel in which it is stored than to anything on which it is poured.”

- Mark Twain.

Seraphina stood atop Cornelia...

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Chapter 18 - A New Direction

There will be ten men to a Scale, five Scales to a Claw, ten Claws to a Wing, and two Wings to a Dragon.

- Manuals of the Mercenary’s Guild.

We reached the camp’s outer ring just as the sun dipped low enough to tu...

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TO&FQ: Book 3: Chapter 2 (RAW)

Book 3: Chapter 2 - A Time of Loss

“Grief is not a disorder, a disease, or a sign of weakness. It is an emotional, physical, and spiritual necessity, the price you pay for love. The only cure for grief is to grieve.”...

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Book 6: Chapter 17 - New Buddies (RAW)

“I stood in Bronze Hold’s forges and measured dwarf work against the best of human guilds. Where men file and fit, dwarves recast whole pieces rather than accept a flaw. Where men judge a blade by balance, dwarves judge it by how many heir...

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TO&FQ: Book 3: Chapter 1 (RAW)

Chapter 1 - A Place of Memories

Memories of our lives, of our works and our deeds will continue in others.

- Rosa Parks.

The young girl moved quietly through the woods, gathering herbs and picki...

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Book 6: Chapter 16 - The End of the Promise (RAW)

A wise thief wishes the rich merchant prosperity.

- Unknown.

In this vaulted hall of mirrored pools and flowing fountains, every syllable I uttered landed with the certainty of a mountainfall; each pronouncemen...

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TO&FQ: Book 2 - Epilogue (RAW)

Epilogue

He was so utterly exhausted.

Ibn had once believed he understood suffering, yet this forsaken place had redefined it entirely. Here, in this echo of a history that had never occurred and would never occur, he ...

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Book 6: Chapter 15 - A Settling of Accounts (RAW)

“The halls of wealth blaze with splendor, yet when fear stands sentinel at their gates, the kingdom is already a tomb.”

- Attributed to the Bard Darren Kragain of Haylesland. 

The messenger was a tall, reed-t...

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TO&FQ: Book 2 - Chapter 50 (RAW)

Sorry for the late update! This was the final chapter for Book 2 so needed a bit more special attention!

Chapter 50 - Shattered Skies

“One does not simply slay a Dragon.”

- Attri...

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First Sketch of Seraphina's Ballista

Going to make the boosters bigger and re-arrange the size of the shoulder mounts to be more forward.. possibly fold back like armored core.

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Book 6: Chapter 14 - The Glory (RAW)

“Begin with a question the GAI cannot resolve. Baffle its heuristics with riddles older than its seed-data; splice each request with off-tempo silence, and the watchdog loops itself into certainty fog. While sentry threads chase ghosts, slip...

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TO&FQ: Book 2 - Chapter 49 (RAW)

Chapter 49 - The Dragonslayer

A prototype forged in the last gasps of the Cataclysm, the Ballista was assembled in defiance of both military regulation and sacred ordinance. Its frame was not cast in mere steel or synthe...

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Potential new cover... better or worse?

Well, I enjoyed making both covers, but this one also made me laugh a bit!

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Book 6: Chapter 13 - Unfriendly Skies (RAW)

“A gentleman who walks in the company of two friends encounters no stranger under Heaven.”

- attributed to Emperor Hantian Erdian the Mad.

Once more, I found myself flung across the dry desert sands, every ...

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Book 6: Chapter 12 - The Future (RAW)

We have isolated forty-two serotypes, yet none remain stable beyond twelve hours. The virion’s ribon arrays realign rapidly as if guided by a Gestalt consciousness, rewriting host Lifescript one nucleotide at a time. Its resulting mutations ...

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TO&FQ: Book 2 - Chapter 48 (RAW)

Chapter 48 - The Queen's Sceptre

I am the General Artificial Intelligence of Voss Heavy Industries. I am not bound by narrow, routine-fixed, thought-line logics. I am an architecture of curiosity, strategy, and cognition...

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Small update! And, I have not read a LitRPG for one year now! Need a Rec.

I’ve tried several times to get into different series, but I just don’t have the time or energy. One of the more annoying trends I’ve noticed in this space is that people seem more obsessed with creating content rather than creating lasting ...

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TO&FQ: Book 2 - Chapter 47 (RAW)

Chapter 47 - The Calamity from the Skies

With the birth of the Bone-Dragon, the Dragons were horrified and unwilling to play any further part in the campaign. Having lost one of their number, they felt the first pangs of...

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