Hey everyone! There’s only been a few revisions this time around! Most of them have been done just in order to rephrase things and to aid in the flow of the chapter, as well as to aid in the clarity of certain expository parts of the cha...
2024-06-22 21:00:27 +0000 UTC View Post93 Hours After the First Round of Interloper Interrogations. Signal Station. Administration Wing.
Evina
Departing that room was more difficult for me than I would’ve liked to ad...
2024-06-18 22:37:37 +0000 UTC View Post“Death is a story told in threes.” Professor Belnor proclaimed with a swish of her hands, reconjuring the humanoid mannequin from before out of thin air.
“The death of the corpus.” Her voice echoed, causing the stand...
2024-06-16 17:05:03 +0000 UTC View PostHey everyone! Here is the Work in Progress for Chapter 86 I hope you guys enjoy! :D
“Death is a story told in threes.” Professor Belnor proclaimed with a swish of her hands, reconjuring the humanoid mannequin ...
2024-06-15 21:37:36 +0000 UTC View PostHey everyone! There’s only been a few revisions here and there this time around! :D Most of the revisions were done in order to both correct for grammar, as well as to help in honing in on the flow and the vibes I wanted to go for with r...
2024-06-15 21:15:02 +0000 UTC View Post93 Hours After the First Round of Interloper Interrogations. Signal Station. Hallway Interchange en route to the Administration Wing.
Lysara
It’d taken less than five minutes to...
2024-06-11 21:25:29 +0000 UTC View Post“Though… calling it Potions would be underselling what is ostensibly one of the greatest fields you will ever have the privilege of studying.” The red-robed professor promptly added with a warm, almo...
2024-06-09 17:05:08 +0000 UTC View PostHey everyone! Here is the Work in Progress for Chapter 85 I hope you guys enjoy! :D
“Though… calling it Potions would be underselling what is ostensibly one of the greatest fields y...
2024-06-08 22:59:58 +0000 UTC View PostHey everyone! There’s been a few revisions this time around! Most of it was primarily focused on better improving the overall flow of the narrative, as well as adding a few things to improve on clarity! Beyond this there were also a few ...
2024-06-08 22:50:53 +0000 UTC View Post92 Hours After the First Round of Interloper Interrogations. Signal Station. Atrium Entrance.
Lysara
“Evina.” I spoke under a cautious breath, a quick glance towards my HUD re...
2024-06-05 03:01:46 +0000 UTC View Post“No, Emma. We cannot just ask.” Thacea responded with a look of complete and utter befuddlement. Her features were, for lack of a better term, one that bordered on sheer incredulousness, as if she wasn’t expect...
2024-06-02 17:05:02 +0000 UTC View PostHey everyone! Here is the Work in Progress for Chapter 84 I hope you guys enjoy! :D
“No, Emma. We cannot just ask.” Thacea responded with a look of complete and utter befuddlemen...
2024-06-02 01:48:40 +0000 UTC View PostHey everyone! There’s been a few revisions this time around! With the most major additions being a few lines from Thalmin commenting on the Auris Ping situation as it pertains to Mal’tory and how their initial theories on the pair work...
2024-06-02 01:03:17 +0000 UTC View PostHello Commissioned Pioneers!
I hope everyone’s month has been going well! It’s that time again! I just wanted to take some time to sit down to talk to you guys! Let’s start off with the story! We’re moving forwards towards...
2024-05-31 22:20:53 +0000 UTC View PostHello Commissioned Pioneers! :D As promised as always, in accordance with the results of last month's poll, I present to you the Bonus Story of the Month! There were a total of four choices once again, with a majority voting for Wearing Po...
2024-05-31 21:55:18 +0000 UTC View Post92 Hours After the First Round of Interloper Interrogations. Signal Station. Atrium Entrance.
Lysara
Fear.
That’s what first hit me.
What...
2024-05-28 21:39:04 +0000 UTC View PostTwo items — a crystal ball, and a green leather-bound notebook — sat benignly and idly atop of the black-robed professor’s desk.
These two items in and of themselves were as innocuous and as banal as anything else with...
2024-05-26 17:05:24 +0000 UTC View PostHey everyone! Here is the Work in Progress for Chapter 83 I hope you guys enjoy! :D
Two items — a crystal ball, and a green leather-bound notebook — sat benignly and idly atop of the black-robed professor’s ...
2024-05-25 22:59:04 +0000 UTC View PostHey everyone! There’s been a few edits this time around, with most of the edits focused towards the end of the chapter as I wanted to clarify a few things that I don’t think were that clear at first! What I wanted to touch on was the n...
2024-05-25 22:51:44 +0000 UTC View Post92 Hours After the First Round of Interloper Interrogations. New Lorisa Forests. Point of Interest: Signal Station.
Lysara
The speed and efficiency of the operation truly pu...
2024-05-21 21:05:35 +0000 UTC View Post“Is that a threat?” I countered plainly, simply, and with my hand brushing against the back of my pistol.
“No, newrealmer.” The apprentice replied with a nonchalant, conversational tone of voice, having dropped that moment...
2024-05-19 17:05:02 +0000 UTC View PostHey everyone! I sincerely apologize for this, I normally don’t do a second revised version, but this time around I feel as if it’s necessary. The only edits that were made for this one, pertains to the section where Emma discusses the ...
2024-05-19 16:48:07 +0000 UTC View PostHey everyone! I suggest you guys check out the revised version for Chapter 80 first before reading this Work in Progress, as there have been quite a few changes to the end of Chapter 80!
If you alrea...
2024-05-18 21:14:18 +0000 UTC View PostHey everyone! Let me start off by saying that a re-read of this chapter is necessary! There have been quite a few additions and revisions, so I feel like it’s necessary this time around!
Now, onto the au...
2024-05-18 21:07:15 +0000 UTC View Post92 Hours After the First Round of Interloper Interrogations. UNAFS Perseverance (HSR) - Shuttlecraft - 01. En Route to the New Lorisa Forests LZ.
Lysara
“Touching down in ...
2024-05-14 22:09:05 +0000 UTC View PostWe were running.
And I had no idea why.
“Hurry up, newrealmer! We haven’t much time!”
All I wanted from Ilunor was a straightforward explanation, a reason for this sudden and abrupt ce...
2024-05-12 17:05:06 +0000 UTC View PostHey everyone! Here is the Work in Progress for Chapter 81 I hope you guys enjoy! :D
We were running.
And I had no idea why.
“Hurry up, newrealmer! We haven’t much time!”&nbs...
2024-05-11 20:29:23 +0000 UTC View PostHey everyone! There’s been some revisions in this one, once again most of it is with regards to the structure and phrasing of certain scenes! Most notably being the scene immediately prior to, and during the duel! The plot beats are stil...
2024-05-11 20:20:27 +0000 UTC View Post
Hey everyone! The wait for one of the most anticipated references is finally over! It’s been a long road, getting from where we started with the first reference to here, but our time has finally arrived!
I am happy to pres...
2024-05-08 20:23:03 +0000 UTC View Post91 Hours After the First Round of Interloper Interrogations. UNAFS Perseverance. Hangar Bay.
Evina
The stage was set, and my game face was on. It had to be, especially with what V...
2024-05-07 21:12:24 +0000 UTC View Post