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NARUTO THE UNTOUCHABLE CHAPTER 50 : ANOTHER BORING MISSION

It took almost 2 days to go back to the village. The first thing which all the people who attempt the mission had to do is to report to lady Hokage all the things that happened in the mission.

This means that Jin also has to go and report. N...

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Minato Template Chapter 67 : Fighting Jiraiya (Rewrite)

"This speed," thought Jiraiya.

Kirito immediately started with Taijutsu and speed to counter Jiraiay in close combat.

Naruto was looking forward to this battle but the speed was so fast that he had a problem seeing the fight.

Jir...

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NARUTO THE UNTOUCHABLE CHAPTER 49 : SAVE GAARA

"Come on, we are very close to the place. We need to hurry up and support Jin and Gaara" shouted Naruto.

Naruto was already very frustrated that Jin went alone to help Gaara without him. He wanted to quickly reach to the place and teach thos...

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Minato Template Chapter 66 : Jiraiya (Rewrite)

"Oi oi, how is this supposed to help me out here" shouted Naruto.

He was having a hard time walking on water in the hot spring. Not to mention, every time he fell, he was getting burned by the hot water.

This scene was exactly like in ...

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Minato Template Chapter 65 : Hospitalized (Rewrite)

Konohagakure No Sato

Konoha Hospital

"What going on here" one of the person in the hospital ask.

"Don't you know that the Uchiha Kid is hospitalize" replied other person.

"Really, but why. Did this happen in the chunin exam...

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Minato Template Chapter 64 : A Lot More To Come (Rewrite)

After the preliminary exams were over. Everyone went on their own way.

Kirito had to go out with Ino and Haku after visiting Naruto in the hospital.

After all this was done, Kirito finally came to his home and had alone time for himsel...

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Minato Template Chapter 63 : Naruto Vs Neji (Rewrite)

This was the last fight of the preliminary round. Naruto was already super confident about his win. Neji was the same but in a more arrogant way.

Kirito was worried about Naruto for this match. He had no idea whether the current Naruto could...

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Minato Template Chapter 62 : One Punch Is Enough (Rewrite)

"Next battle Ino vs Tenten," said the proctor.

"Another full kunoichi fight," thought Kirito.

"Okay, let's make this fight a quick one," thought Ino.

Tenten from the side just entered the battle area and got ready to fight.

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Minato Template Chapter 61 : Preliminary Fight 2 (Rewrite)

"Next Fight Hinata and Yuroi" said the proctor.

The arena was filled with tense anticipation as Hinata Hyuga faced off against Yuroi, a skilled and intimidating opponent. Hinata's heart pounded in her chest as she assessed Yuroi's formidable...

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Minato Template Chapter 60 : Preliminary Fights (Rewrite)

The air crackled with anticipation as Sasuke Uchiha and Kiba Inuzuka faced off in the Chunin Exam preliminary round. While Kiba was nervous, Sasuke was not even considering Kiba as an opponent, and the tension between them was palpable. The crowd ...

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NARUTO THE UNTOUCHABLE CHAPTER 48 : NO TIME TO PLAY

Itachi saw with the eyes of his clone, Kisame getting blasted with Jin's kick.

It was not like any kick he have seen before. He has never seen such a powerful taijutsu.

" I would have played with you too Itachi san but I Got No Time To...

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Minato Template Chapter 59 : Haku Vs Temari (Rewrite)

Both Temari and Haku faced each other and were ready to start the fight. This was the exact time the proctor started the match.

Haku with lightning reflexes sent multiple sensors towards Temari but Temari simply deflected all of this with a ...

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Minato Template Chapter 58 : Preliminary Matches (Rewrite)

It was a long wait but finally, the preliminary rounds started just like in the canon.

Kirito was surprised to find that Haku made her way to the tower much faster than his team.

Almost all the rookie team passes the test. Maybe the on...

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NARUTO GODLY TALENT CHAPTER 47 : THIS PROBLEM CHILD

The audience was silent the moment Akira fall in the ground. No one made any noise and everyone was looking at Akira as he lost.

"Huh, big talk for a clan-less orphan like you" Neji said this time in more heat and anger.

"Maybe, my tal...

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NARUTO THE UNTOUCHABLE CHAPTER 47 : JIN VS ITACHI AND KISAME

As the fight raged on, the landscape started to change.

Jin had to fight both Kisame and Itachi simultaneously. He was very careful of not to look into Itachi's eye and get into a Genjutsu.

Both Akatsuki members could have overpowered ...

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Minato Template Chapter 57 : Karin (Rewrite)

<KARIN POV>

The moment when the masked man was about to grab me. This person saved me.

I don't even know his name or could see his face clearly because my glasses fell off the moment he saved me.

While jumping from tree to ...

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NARUTO GODLY TALENT CHAPTER 46 : GENTLE FIST COUNTER

"And now the last match, Akira Raito vs Neji Hyuga," said the proctor and Akira finally got the chance to take part and showcase his different techniques and tools.

"Alright, let's make this a good show shall we," said Akira and enter the fi...

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Minato Template Chapter 56 : Fooled A Sannin (Rewrite)

"Ku ku kuku, I was not expecting all of you to come back again. Kirito Kun should have just let go and run away himself," said Orochimaru.

Everyone was getting more and more tired after running and fighting with Orochimaru.

When everyo...

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NARUTO THE UNTOUCHABLE CHAPTER 46 : JIN VS KISAME

Jin arrive right in front of the cave in which the Akatsuki bought Gaara and was extracting his Biju.

The moment he arrived, The Akatsuki sensed him.

"What is this, how is this person here so quickly? Why no one sense him coming" said ...

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Minato Template Chapter 55 : Title At The End (Rewrite)

Naruto did not have anyone tell him whether he could fight someone or not. Especially when his brother will be fighting the same guy who he is currently running from.

"No. I am not running, Believe it" mutters Naruto.

It was Shikamaru ...

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NARUTO GOLDLY TALENT CHAPTER 45 : LEE VS GAARA

This is the second last fight of the preliminary test, and the arena was packed with spectators eagerly awaiting the next match. The air crackled with anticipation as Rock Lee, a determined and hardworking member of Team Guy, stepped onto the aren...

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NARUTO THE UNTOUCHABLE CHAPTER 45 : A CONVERSATION WITH KAKASHI

It took more than 2 days for the teams to reach the Sand Village.

Jin was totally bored though out the journey. He never wanted to come. He never likes to come off the early shipudden missions and episodes anyways.

It's pretty boring a...

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Minato Template Chapter 54 : Idiots (Rewrite)

While Kirito's clones were creating a plan to take care of Orochimaru. Orochimaru said something which honestly picked his interest.

"Do you want to know who are your parents or how they died? Or perhaps who killed them" said Orochimaru, kno...

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Minato Template Chapter 53 : Hook Line And Sinker (Rewrite)

"Ironic, last time I checked, your father too was not able to save your mother. Like father like son I like to guess." mocked Obito.

"Like you are the one to talk" thought Kirito.

"Maybe, but I assure you that this is not the case toda...

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Minato Template Chapter 52 : Like Father Like Son (Rewrite)

Obito's true intention was to kidnap Uzumaki Karin.

Kirito had no idea why, but he wanted Karin. So he asks Karin to run because he wants to see what Obito chooses.

Will he be fighting him? If so then he can't do anything.

"But i...

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NARUTO GODLY TALENT CHAPTER 44 : SASUKE VS KANKURO

"Shikamaru Nara and Kin please come to the fighting ground," said the Proctor.

"Such a drag," Said Shikamaru.

Shikamaru did not wanted to fight but his mother cornered him. If he did not give his 100 per cent then he will not get food ...

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NARUTO THE UNTOUCHABLE CHAPTER 44 : TO THE LAND OF WINDS

As the fight keep on going both Jin and Guy knew that they are not making any difference and needed to up their game.

At this point, even Naruto, Kakashi and Sakura stopped fighting because the fight between Guy and Jin was a little too dest...

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Minato Template Chapter 51 : Power Gap (Rewrite)

Sasuke didn't have any idea what happened suddenly but a powerful wind came and blew Naruto away.

Sakura and himself were somehow saved but that was only temporary. Soon Naruto came back but Sasuke had his doubts.

"Stop there, what is ...

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Minato Template Chapter 50 : Shit What Now (Rewrite)

Tension was in the air and there was silence all around.

After wasting Obito's one Sharingan, Kirito now knew that fighting him would be hard because from now on Obito will be using his Kamui technique.

Obito took action first and rush...

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NARUTO GODLY TALENT CHAPTER 43 : SOME BORING FIGHTS

After Hinata and Ino's match, there was a match between Shino and Douzu.

Shino and Douzu faced off in an intense battle, each determined to prove their strength. The air crackled with anticipation as they exchanged glares, ready to unleash t...

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