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NARUTO THE UNTOUCHABLE CHAPTER 98 : TO THE LOGUETOWN

When all the people of the Cocoyashi village show Jin killing Arlong in front of their eyes. They could not believe it.

It took some time before they believed what just happened and then there were tears in their eyes.

I have to say. T...

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Minato Template Chapter 182 : Against Akatsuki (Rewrite)

"Now the last ingredient for the ritual" Hidan muttered but I totally heard him saying and got ready.

With that said he jumped towards me.

And now that crazy bastard wants to take my blood. Like As if.

I just send few Kunai at hi...

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NARUTO THE UNTOUCHABLE CHAPTER 97 : JIN VS ARLONG

"So you are the only one left with what you say. Surrender and I might not kill you" Jin said to Arlong.

"You insufferable Human. You don't understand how much we Fish Man is better than you. We are the most evolved beings on this planet. Do...

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Minato Template Chapter 181 : Hidan And Kakuzu (Rewrite)

"Let's see a black coat with red clouds made on it. Weird black nail polish on the nails. There is no doubt about it. This is a member of the Akatsuki alright" Asuma said with confirmation.

"So you really sense them from all the way from Fir...

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NARUTO THE UNTOUCHABLE CHAPTER 96 : ARLONG PARK

After going to the Cocoyashi village. Jin's first job was to get as much as information he can get from the residents of the village.

Unfortunately for him. No one gave him any information about Nami. But they were quite vocal about Arlong a...

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Minato Template Chapter 180 : The Fire Temple (Rewrite)

Before starting the chapter, I just want to thank all of you for supporting this fic this much.

Thanks to all of you, I have been able to complete 200 chapters. Honestly, when I started this fic, I aimed to complete the fic under 100 chapter...

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NARUTO THE UNTOUCHABLE CHAPTER 95 : GOING AFTER NAMI

"This is not the place for a good fight," Jin replied.

"Yes, it's not" Mihawk nodded.

Both kept looking at each other for a few seconds and then Mihawk put his sword back on his back.

Jin too just smiled and put his staff back in...

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Minato Template Deleted Ch (Konoha Under Attack 4)

Good good.

Now I only have to see what's wrong with Naruto.

With that said I instantly teleported near Naruto.

The moment I arrived there I found a heavy chakra influx.

"There is no doubt that this is Nine Tail Chakra".

...

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NARUTO THE UNTOUCHABLE CHAPTER 94 : JIN VS MIHAWK

Jin stood opposite to Mihawk, both of them glaring at each other. Trying to understand each other's powers.

"Since when a powerful figure like you appear in the east blue" Mihawk asked.

"Not long. And I don't plan to stay here for long...

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Minato Template Deleted Ch (Konoha Under Attack 3)

The raging fire ended up smashing into the water wall and a terrible amount of smoke came.

It was getting hard to see in the smoke and Kirito used this to his advantage and immediately launched his flying thunder god technique and appeared b...

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Minato Template Deleted Ch (Konoha Under Attack 2)

After Tsunade was done giving orders. I made 4 clones and sent them to disturb the barrier.

I myself directly when towards the closest enemy chakra.

That boy, Sora. I sense chakra very similar to Nine Tails Charka from him. I am not su...

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Minato Template Deleted Ch (Konoha Under Attack 1)

" Thats was fantastic".

"See I told you that I will make it up with you" I said looking at the happy Sakura.

"I still can't believe that you have a resort hidden. Its quite mean of you to just kept that all for youself you know." Sakur...

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NARUTO THE UNTOUCHABLE CHAPTER 93 : MIHAWK IS HERE

I was training in the sky as there is no land here for me to do so, when I suddenly heard a loud sound coming.

I quickly looked down to notice that A big ship was coming towards Baratie.

This was our 3rd day in Baratie and honestly, I ...

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NARUTO THE UNTOUCHABLE CHAPTER 92 : BARATIE

After taking care of Kuro and the black cat pirates.

Out entire group again went back to Kaya and this time we even had the proof as that not so Nobel butler ended up attacking another butler in Kaya's household.

Merry was attacked but...

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Minato Template Chapter 179 : Teaching And Learning 3 (Rewrite)

"So you are training Naruto in wind Style and then you will teach him the wind style rasengan" Kakashi who just come back from his mission with Jiraiya asked.

After coming, Tsuande directly put Kakashi responsible for Naruto's security. Alth...

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Minato Template Chapter 178 : Teaching And Learning 2 (Rewrite)

"Why we are here" Naruto asked, a little frown on his face.

I just bought Naruto to the Valley of the End. The reason is, that there is no other good waterfall around to learn wind nature chakra transformation.

And the reason why Narut...

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NARUTO THE UNTOUCHABLE CHAPTER 91 : ONE PUNCH K.O

I was watching all the black cat pirates docking and coming out. Also waiting for Luffy and Ussop.

"So what do you think? How strong they are. I can't sense Chakra from them. They are mostly like those bandits we encounter in the forests" I ...

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NARUTO THE UNTOUCABLE CHAPTER 90 : PIRATES ARE COMING

By the time Zoro and I reach the place where the other members' straw hats are. I saw a huge mansion.

Honestly, it looked pretty cool. Wish I had a mansion like this when I was on the earth. The entire place is a little too much for one pers...

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NARUTO THE UNTOUCHABLE CHAPTER CHAPTER 89 : SYRUP VILLAGE

"Are you sure that you want to fight with me"

"Yes"

"Well good enough then."

This was the conversation I was having with Zoro.

After taking care of Buggy. Our small group with Nami ended up taking her boat. (By force as I s...

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NARUTO GODLY TALENT CHAPTER 31 : ELEMENTAL JUKEN

"Are you sure that want to fight with me?" Hiashi asked

"I am sure that no one except you can handle my version of Juken. I called it Elemental Juken" I said with a smile.

This one thing caught Hiashi's attention.

"Elemental Juke...

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Minato Template Chapter 177 : Teaching And Learning (Rewrite)

Days like this kept on going and I kept on training with Naruto.

I remember that in Shippuden, Naruto trains under Kakashi and Yamato to create wind-style Rasen Shuriken.

This time around, I thought, I started teaching Naruto a lot ear...

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Minato Template Chapter 176 : Rasengan And Taijutsu (Rewrite)

Konohagakure No Sato

Training Ground 10.

"Alright Brother, as you said you need me to train you. Before I do that I first have to fix things which are already wrong with you" I said with as much patience as I muster for my knuckle-head...

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Minato Template Chapter 175 : Let Get Strong Together (Rewrite)

"Gosh Kirito kun. Why are you suddenly here" Guy asked.

I just bowed and then asked.

"Please train me in Taijutsu," I said.

And the rest is history guys.

After this many years in Konoha, I am pretty aware of Guys personalit...

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NARUTO GODLY TALENT CHAPTER 30 : LETS FIGHT

"What was that" Itachi asked in a daze.

Fugaku too rushes towards Akira alongside Hiashi and asks the same question.

I just replied to this and just smiled.

"That was breathing technique. A special kind of breathing which allows ...

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Minato Template Chapter 174 : Time To End This Mission (Rewrite)

Kirito saw once again a purple giant forming.

"This again" Kirito could not help but mutter.

"Fine then, let's end this long drawn-out fight already." Kirito thought to himself and then started drawing his chakra.

He then with al...

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Minato Template Chapter 173 : Facing Sasuke 4 (Rewrite)

Kirito at this time was watching a  totally demonised Sasuke watching him like he was the prey here.

Kirito looked serious and waited for anything Sasuke threw towards himself.

But then his instincts were like screaming at him and...

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NARUTO GODLY TALENT CHAPTER 29 : SUN BREATHING FIRST FORM

"I've always been a person who specialised in Swordsmanship and Ninjutsu" I replied with a smirk.

"What then why you did not use a sword in our fight".

"I wanted to but I did not have my sword with me back then. I was not expecting gra...

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Minato Template Chapter 172 : Facing Sasuke 3 (Rewrite)

And then the Black Flames tornado smashed into the Susanoo.

The entire Susanoo was covered in black flames.

After only the violent wind was gone, Sasuke was able to control the black flames and remove them from the Susanoo.

At th...

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Minato Template Chapter 171 : Facing Sasuke 2 (Rewrite)

"Guys stay focused. Someone is here. Someone dangerous." The clone said and others also became vigilant.

Soon the person who the clone felt came out.

The clone looked at this person and his eyes narrowed.

He saw a person wearing ...

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Minato Template Chapter 170 : Facing Sasuke (Rewrite)

"Ah, Orochi Uncle praised me. Now I am finally feeling that I have accomplished something in my life" I rolled my eyes.

"I don't think you should talk when you are fighting me" Sasuke said and suddenly electricity came alive around him.

<...

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