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Chapter 106/107 - Arc 7 - We're Ready Kakashi, The Chunin Exams Start Now! - Revealing Insights, Iruka's a bad teacher?/Making a scene in front of everyone

Double feature today, thank you for your patience.
Technically these chapters where I'm using canon as a structure are easier, but they're still a lot of work because Sakura's so different from canon at this point. They all are to some extent b...

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Chapter 105 - Arc 7 - We're Ready Kakashi, The Chunin Exams Start Now! - Sasuke Cares?

We have a lot of small events to go over from the new perspective of Sakura and this team before we get to the actual forest, which is when all the massive changes will start.

Still, I think this is a very different experience than watching...

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Chapter 104 - Arc 7 - We're Ready Kakashi, The Chunin Exams Start Now! - The Prelim Test is at 10PM on Tuesday!

Here you go, only a few hours late technically. Well okay I kinda wanna get it closer to like 10 hours ago but like, it's still Monday in parts of the world and not even that obscure ones so I'm pretty happy.

Turns out they actually did do p...

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Chapter 103 - Arc 7 - We're Ready Kakashi, The Chunin Exams Start Now! - Iruka Checks In

Working on 104 as you read this. The side-story is on the way too. Schedule's fucky and it's causing problems but I'm in a good place for this so no worries.

Iruka checks in with Sakura, which is cool. Next chapter that pre-test the Hokage ...

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Chapter 102 - Arc 7 - We're Ready Kakashi, The Chunin Exams Start Now! - Getting the cute genin registered

Long AN is long.

So last chapter I sorta stole a pretty big moment from Sasuke, I always feel a little bad when that happens because Sasuke doesn't get a lot of those. He's sorta just there for a lot of canon, and that issue is even more pre...

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Chapter 100/101 - Arc 6/7 - Onward, To Suna!/We're Ready Kakashi, The Chunin Exams Start Now! - Clearing up Misunderstandings/Blowing Up with Children

So here are the chapters I owe. I only lost one Patron for this past week and honestly, I doubt it was even connected. It's nice to be able to have a mental health crisis and everyone's just relatively okay with it.

CH 101 is a little odd,...

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Canon Side-Story: Ino's Charm, Tenten's Expertise

And here we go. I ended up playing with my brother for like six hours, that was pretty cool.
Played Palworld, I love Palworld. Such a good game...

Anyway, this was a lot of fun. I love Sakura/Tenten shenanigans, and Sakura/Ino shenanigan...

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Chapter 99 - Arc 6 - Onward, To Suna! - Coming Home from Suna

Heya, sorry about the late chapter and the side story. Depression hit me with the stick. I always prioritize quality over promptness, and while I understand that decision has probably cost me supporters over the months, uh, that's okay.

Thi...

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Chapter 98 - Arc 6 - Onward, To Suna! - Worms in the Sand!

There are motherfuckin worms, in the motherfuckin Sand!

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Not getting any of her expected adventuring is truly disappointing. She was expecting Suna to be a great means of fun for her...

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Chapter 97 - Arc 6 - Onward, To Suna! - Shouting Jacks!

Lost like 4 patrons in the last day, always sad.
Mostly about that $300 goal. It seemed so close a few months ago but now I'm never sure I'll get to it.
It's not the biggest deal, I'm happy with where we are, but I would love to devote more ...

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Chapter 96 - Arc 6 - Onward, To Suna! - Sibling Bonding, Trapped in a Hotel edition

I'm actually several chapters ahead, so this is nice.
I'm currently watching through the Chunin exams and making notes so that I can at least have a frame of proper reference for what I'm writing instead of going off pure memory and my o...

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Canon Side-Story: Hinata's Observations

I was actually pretty excited to write this one, which is why it's chapter length.
Enjoy!

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Watching the house of another person without their permission is a crime. Well, thereâ€...

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Chapter 95 - Arc 6 - Onward, To Suna! - Murderbunny

The fun thing about an outline is that I'm actually ahead for once.
Unfortunately, Friday's chapter is the end of the outline, turns out I had less than I thought and a good portion of what's left is 2AM rambles that don't make a whole lot of s...

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Chapter 94 - Arc 6 - Onward, To Suna! - Aftermath of the Fun Ruining

Suna's fun, I'm having fun.
I like Suna.

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The atmosphere and grim mood she’s met with when she walks into their hotel ...

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Chapter 93 - Arc 6 - Onward, To Suna! - Outing with Gaara

I had fun writing this.
Gaara's so cute... Dangerous though, so dangerous.

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Sakura hasn’t gotten a lot of chances to explore in her life. By the time she ...

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Canon Side-Story: Necromancy, Due Diligence

Disclaimer: I think I've been misled by fanfiction about who Tsume and Kiba and Hana are, I've always thought they were very important to the clan, if not at the top, but I actually can't find anything official stating that at all. So, because I'm...

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Canon Side-Story: Making Friends Pt 2

Here was the second poll from last week. Gonna host this week's poll here in a minute, feel free to join it if you have a spare few bucks. The upgrade from $5 to $10 is in fact, only $5, it doesn't charge you twice.

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Chapter 92 - Arc 6 - Onward, To Suna! - Meeting the Client

Uh... This chapter was fun. I actually went a little off outline here, which is okay, that's the beauty of an outline.
I still have 6 pages of outline for this arc, I'm so happy.

Catch me doin a Haruno Wiggle.

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Chapter 91 - Arc 6 - Onward, To Suna! - Excited to Move

Here we are, Chapter 2 of Arc 6.
I'm having fun. It's really nice to have a freaking outline for once. Woo!

Hope you're all having fun. I am.

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It’s nice to be o...

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Canon Side-Story: Shooting Training with Tenten, Traps with Naruto

“Like this, and here…” When she invited Ino to come practice marksmanship with Tenten, she had expected the three of them to spend most of their time throwing weapons and shooting off Tenten’s prototypes. The special guns from the dungeon ...

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Chapter 90 - Arc 6 - Onward, To Suna! - Class Is Out

I had a lot of fun planning this chapter. This arc has an actual plan to it, maybe not scene for scene but more than enough that I don't think it'll have a lot of the issues Arc 4 and 5 did. I mean, I did have plans that came to fruition in them, ...

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Canon Side-Story: Forest of Death, That Time Naruto Got Eaten

This is a day late but honestly, I'm happy it is. I've created this odd setup where because of work stresses, most things get made day of, and I have to force it. While I don't regret a lot of the decisions I've made with this story, strict deadli...

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Canon Side-Story: Todolist, Sakura Learns to Cook

Notes: On Friday we’re doing

Canon Side-Story: Forest of Death, That Time Naruto Got Eaten. Next Monday we'll be voting on two side-stories again, for Wednesday and Friday.
Though on next Friday we'll be getting a chapter so like, that...

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Chapter 89 - Arc 5.9 - Wrapping Up - Character Growth

This story has been a lot of fun, and honestly the coolest writing journey of my life. It's had ups, and downs, and I've grown as a person. I'm a better writer, a little more whimsical but better.
With this chapter Arc 5 comes to an end. I am ...

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Chapter 88 - Arc 5.9 - Wrapping Up - Some Loose Ends

Hey'll ya'll, tomorrow's Chapter is the last one of this arc.
I hope you enjoy this, I tried to get the old comedic feel for a little. I'm not sure how well it worked, but sometimes trying is all you got, at least it's all I got.
If nothing ...

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Chapter 87 - Arc 5.8 - Back In, Exploring Hunger - The Red Room

The last chapter before we head into the wrap up of Arc 5. Next chapter will involve, mostly, wrapping up a few small plots, doing some cleaning, and then setting up Chapter 89 which'll be the last chapter of Arc 5.

Then I'll take my week o...

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What-If: Ino had Gotten Gaming Powers Instead

Another week above $70, another side story.
This one was a tie among the $10 tiers so I flipped and came up Heads. If you want to be the tie breaker, you totally can, just join that sweet tier.

I'll admit What-Ifs are odd with just how ma...

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Member Loss Surge

I understand that my work here isn't going to maintain interest with everyone forever, I wouldn't expect it to. I also understand that people might want to take breaks, and that interest in the story isn't permanent. Some may not like where the st...

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Chapter 86 - Arc 5.8 - Back In, Exploring Hunger - A Direction Obtained, Forward

Here we go moving forward again.
Nothing much to say here, just hope you're all having a good day and please enjoy the chapter.

Friday and Sunday's chapters will probably be wrapping up some loose ends and stuff and then we're onto Arc 6,...

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Chapter 85 - Arc 5.8 - Back In, Exploring Hunger - "Mom?"

Sakura needs an adult!

Thank you all for your continued support.
CH 64 saw like 50 words of small wording edits to make it flow better.

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“Why did I have to bri...

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