late august picture
Added 2017-09-02 12:59:59 +0000 UTCshould've finished this one before but it takes so long. I usually draw almost 10 hours (5hours each day) for a picture (yea im quite slow at drawing! lol), you can imagine how long it takes to draw this one.
well, the background is detailed but not so detailed (wtf am i saying? lol) and the main focus is not quite finished too. I make the color kinda violet-ish, I hope its not that weird. Still want to change some things but once again if I keep polishing this stuff I dont know when this will end. X_X
WIP on attachment along with png picture
Comments
Hey it's cool you're trying different style so don't worry too much if it doesn't fit you or it takes you more time do it. In the end don't put too much thought it my comments I'm no artist and have no formation whatsoever, I'm just a guy who look at too much porn and want to provide some feedback beside clicking on a "like" button.
HibouBarbu
2017-09-03 12:58:21 +0000 UTCyea in the end I understand that lines are kinda important in almost all kind of pictures, especially one that isnt too detailed. never go full lineless unless we have the time and dedication for finishing a single picture perfectly.
2017-09-03 12:42:04 +0000 UTCWith just the little edit you did, I find the girl to be more the main focus probably because some of her line are more sharp and the slight color change make stand out more. A really nice pic in the end
HibouBarbu
2017-09-03 12:35:15 +0000 UTCyea i need to find a way to make the girl stand out more.
2017-09-03 11:54:32 +0000 UTCmaybe because i use the official art as reference, the artist sure knows how to make things so noticable.
2017-09-03 11:53:48 +0000 UTCNice picture but there is one thing about it, the main focus for me at least is not the girl but the background. For some reason my eyes are drawn to the background, which is awesome but that's the problem the girl doesn't stand out against it. She's beautiful and she seems to love what's happening to her but even if she's in the front she kinda blend in with the back. Overall I really like the picture, the girl is great and the background is awesome.
HibouBarbu
2017-09-02 20:43:00 +0000 UTCGee wowza you really outdid urself on this one. Abselutely love the background. Usually the girl takes all the attention but here i sort of noticed the background first. So that gotta mean something lol
Kameho
2017-09-02 15:28:56 +0000 UTC
