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Added 2017-09-16 20:40:16 +0000 UTCso, my internet went down again. internet in my country is really bad, i must use my cellphone with about 20-30KBps in speed right now, so bear with me. this is the part 1 comic. i think its better to remove page 1 from before because that tentacle needle will add more things that need to be explained. I replace it with a short explanation (1st panel).
I resize it down quite a bit so i can upload it. the text is still readable tho, if you're willing, I want you guys to read and fix some mispell/ grammatical error/ too cheesy dialogue (ignore if only a bit cheesy lol). and if you have hotter things to add in the dialogue I will consider it too.
My own opinion about this comic: I underestimated the page needed for this lol. the pacing is too fast imo because early pages should've contain more build-up and explanation. only contains 6 where i think 12 is the minimum... I think about adding more panels but for hentai comic where pictures is important, more panels mean smaller panel, and smaller panel is a big no.
Next month should be easier since it only contains sex (dont know if i miscalculate it again and it turned out harder than the first part LOL). for the months after that, we will go back to pictures. I don't think I will make these kind of comic for monthly patreon again. at least not until i am ready. lol.
Comments
Story is quite interesting. shame about your Internet. i'm not sure what might be causing it. But if you suspect faulty wiring, i could perhaps give you some hints and tips since that's my line of profession and what i work with. so i know how to fix unstable internett in most cases of its poor signal quality
Kameho
2017-09-16 23:40:43 +0000 UTC
