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which one

hello, my internet has been fixed...

from some feedback before, some of you prefer a bit shading.

now about coloring, is some minimalistic coloring better? or we stick with just some shading?


*dialogue feedback still needed*

which one

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Personally I would stay in black and white, color is nice but for doujins, comics it's not necessary.

HibouBarbu

Indeed, like the above - If you add color, yay. But again if you don't mind the workload.

Furyfire

I agree that color is always generally better, but it also usually adds that much more work. The main reason why I did not like the third option was because there was too much going on and it was difficult to pick out details. However, the first and second options resolved that by giving definition to the characters and scene. Regarding the pacing of the panels, I think it is progressing too quickly. The transitions between panels are very abrupt. I do not believe there is anything wrong with extending the comic by making the comic more coherent and powerful as a story. I understand that maybe you want to produce more results per month, but my opinion is that it should not be at the expense of the storyboarding. And I admit that dialogue does need some work. :p But the smut is great. We all like smut. :D

pookyrawr

Coloring is always nice. However it can be an out of work. If it feels to much you can always color the first 3 pages and let rest be sketches. Many of the pro manga/doujins are like that

Kameho


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