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โœ… Nebula Book 1


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๐Ÿช Also in The Ezron Series...

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Kyros

The First Her (book 2)

The First Flame

โœ… Nebula Book 1

Comments

Canโ€™t wait for Saturday ๐Ÿ™†๐Ÿปโ€โ™€๏ธ

silentscarlettt

He was going against everything his father thought him, why? You can help planet from extension in nice way not by raping a one from only 2 woman on your planet now.

Puikute

I think we are judging too harshly ๐Ÿคท๐Ÿพโ€โ™€๏ธ the guy is trying to save his species with a being thought to be extinct. And in the end he couldnโ€™t do it and he begged her for forgiveness. We all have been in a situation where we wanted to do something bad but our morals/values stopped us. Give Ak time he will grow on us I hope ๐Ÿคž๐Ÿพ

Vanity Devine

I enjoyed it. I thought he had gotten much farther but heโ€™s still a dumb asshole. Iโ€™m ready for the heart ache and slow burn romance that is Ak and nebula though!โค๏ธ๐Ÿ˜ฉ

Danie L.

Uh no Vrox did not sexually assault her. He had no idea she was female remember? and thought she was wounded so he was tending to her "wounds" if he knew she was female and then did what he did, which is what AK tried to do, then it is messed up. It's like saying a child sexually assaulted you when they touch ur boobs

S.O.J

@passioncinnamon25 like I would like for them to get together cause it would be good for the story and he gets on his knees and crap but dude almost getting raped realistically is a dead end I would hate him unless he does something huge and spontaneous like dying for her could he earn forgiveness but never even something as small as a date tho

Javiera Gando

Thank you for the two updates!!!! That was the best thing to wake up and see that!!!๐Ÿ’• I'm so excited to see where you take this story๐Ÿ˜Š

MaKell Mason

I don't feel completely comfortable with this story because of that.... ๐Ÿ˜… I don't want her to ever forgive him. That's awful. We're talking about attempted rape here... I don't think an actual person can get over that. I feel like she's so chill about it. I will get really upset if they end up together. I don't care how long it takes, I don't care that he knows it was wrong and he feels guilty, your feelings don't matter the same way you didn't care about hers. That's something that can't be forgiven. *** you Ak

PassionCinnamon 25

But I think the huge difference here is the intention behind the action. Nebula could see it/feel it. I mean, is pretty easy to notice that. So, he knew what he was doing and he still tried so... yeah. Also, Kira didn't like it at the beginning. It wasn't until she realized that he had no idea of what he doing that she started to like it. And then later on when he understood what he did, he felt really bad and asked for forgivenes.

PassionCinnamon 25

2 updates... thank you for ๐Ÿ™Œ

Jo-anna Mc Dowald

Iโ€™m torn but ik what the realistic carp would be at least with me

Javiera Gando

Like other readers come on how can she forgive that

Javiera Gando

Bro Iโ€™m all for ak and nebula getting together cause the story kinda started progressing but at the same time itโ€™s like what type of self respecting womanโ€™s gonna forgive that piece of garbage for trying to do what he did. At least if she goes for kudos or niev at least she wonโ€™t get a dud who will try to do harm. Unless she like changes him completely even then still

Javiera Gando

What if Nebula touches kyros scales at times making al jealous because thatโ€™s only a couple act. Kyros doesnโ€™t stop her because he knows what Ak has done to the poor girl. Niโ€™ev and Nebula bonding over engineering and black smithing is Ak worst nightmare. Having to see โ€˜his femaleโ€™ enjoy spending time with another male.

Serenity

Definitely! I also think because of Vrox innocence and cuteness, it basically pulls the wool over peoples eyes that what Vrox did was still sexual assault. Yet Ak is getting sh*t on so much more than Vrox. Again I still love Vrox soo much but Ak is so misunderstood.

AnnaD

I feel like nebula will become great friends with one of the brothers, creating a very jealous Ak, who has to earn her forgiveness.

Serenity

Thanks for the update. Looking forward to reading more. Ak! Glad his body was not intoned with his thoughts.

SheilaRN

Not gonna lie, I thought by how nebula reacted in the first she.. that AK actually got far.... but like Vrox actually touched Kiara against her will more than once.... the only difference is that Kiara ended up liking it... but.like.. AK didnโ€™t even pull her shirt off.... he just held her down, how does she know thatโ€™s what he was doing? I mean obviously as readers we know his plan but on her end he was just holding her so..... idk maybe itโ€™s just me but Vrox was worse in the beginning ๐Ÿคท๐Ÿปโ€โ™€๏ธ..... still love Vrox with my whole ass heart but Iโ€™m just saying.

Mikayla Speck

i'm so ready for this slow burn relationship ๐Ÿฅบ

nana

He really made a mess and I doubt she will ever forgive him

Ndalamo Tharage

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Cremebrumay

WE DONT STAN... not yet anyways

Cremebrumay

Yeah fuck you ak! ๐Ÿคฌ๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Ž

Cremebrumay

Poor Nebbie! Iโ€™ve been waiting for this update for weeks! Thank you oh great one!! Ak need his ass whooped , I know his heart wasnโ€™t in but I canโ€™t wait for her to tear into when she finally is able to speak Ethoriean , damn I spelled that all types of wrong ๐Ÿ˜…

Riquca Reynolds

So excited!!๐Ÿ˜

Tristen Lehigh

That sounds absolutely terrifying for Nebula.

Claire

Yes!

Nicole

This is just a big yikes

Kat

Omg i was waiting for thiss!! Thank you

SJB

Itโ€™s about to go downnnn

Lindsey Gansen


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