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Chapter 192: Messy Schedule (4- F)

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Another Great Chapter. So whatโ€™s up with Abby?

Julien

Excellent chapter, I especially liked the dance scene and the attraction between Ed and Haley is undeniable, but I was hoping for a more romantic moment at the dance, like the two of them dancing to a slow song, the two of them stuck together.

Matias Arce

Thanks for the great chapter. However, I do have something to note. I get that this is modern family ff, but Ed doesnโ€™t spend any time with his Dad (he is most times forgotten) instead he does everything with the Dunphis. He doesnโ€™t feel like a dad at all more like a family friend if anything. And I am so fucking happy you addressed his people pleasing tendencies.

BLazeSavage

๐ŸคŒ๐ŸคŒ next to muah ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Cedrick Jacobe

Itโ€™s a long long way to ba sing se, first and foremost I really like the references, especially the God father, Fulgencio is one of my favourite ep in the show, and yesssss, Ed slight remark on Haleyโ€™s dress as well as the jacket on the shoulder move.. was *muah the connection remains strong. Hahah I just imagine our boy Edward having the Saitama face when he saw Taylor was her neighbour and a in bolded letters โ€œ Bruhhhhโ€ flying by above his head lol ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿ˜‚.

Cedrick Jacobe

Noooo auto correct, I meant rest๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…

Cedrick Jacobe

Thanks you for the hard work author-san, do make sure to feast well๐Ÿ˜Š

Cedrick Jacobe

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