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[IMPORTANT ANNOUNCMENT] + [Comic] Kamisato Ayaka Vacation Shower

I'm taking my content to the next level !!
๐Ÿ‡บ๐Ÿ‡ธ English

Hey everyone!
Just a heads-up โ€” Iโ€™ll be experimenting with dialogue and creating full doujinshi-style works from now on! ๐Ÿ’ฌโœจ That means each post will take a bit longer, but I really want to take my content to the next level.

For now, Iโ€™ll be posting full sets as omake (bonus-style), while I test this new format out. Since the focus is shifting toward storytelling through dialogue, the images might not always follow a perfectly coherent flow like the usual mute-style sets โ€” just something to keep in mind!

Each set will still come with full illustrations (for now!), but if this works out long-term, I might not draw illustrations for every single doujinshi set.

Also! Iโ€™ll only be doing dialogue with characters Iโ€™m already familiar with โ€” but no worries, Iโ€™m still taking requests as always ๐Ÿฅฐ

And yep โ€” Iโ€™ll also be working to improve my paneling, storytelling, and the proper use of speech bubbles over time. Itโ€™s a learning journey!

Just giving this a shot and seeing how it goes in the long runโ€ฆ (nervous smile lol)

Let me know what you think in the comments! I'd love your feedback ๐Ÿ’ฌโค๏ธ

๐Ÿ‡จ๐Ÿ‡ณ Chinese (Simplified)

ๅคงๅฎถๅฅฝ๏ฝž
่ทŸๅคงๅฎถ่ฏดไธ€ๅฃฐ๏ผŒๆˆ‘ๆŽฅไธ‹ๆฅไผšๅฐ่ฏ•ๅšไธ€ไบ›ๆœ‰ๅฏน่ฏ็š„ๆœฌๅญ้ฃŽๆ ผไฝœๅ“ๅ•ฆ๏ผ๐Ÿ’ฌโœจ
่ฟ™ๆ„ๅ‘ณ็€ๆฏๆฌกๆ›ดๆ–ฐๅฏ่ƒฝไผš็จๅพฎๆ…ขไธ€็‚น๏ผŒไฝ†ๆˆ‘็œŸ็š„ๆƒณๆŠŠๅ†…ๅฎนๆๅ‡ๅˆฐๆ–ฐๅฑ‚ๆฌก๏ผ

็›ฎๅ‰ๆˆ‘ไผšไปฅ omake๏ผˆ็•ชๅค–/่ต ๅ“๏ผ‰ ็š„ๅฝขๅผๅ‘ๅธƒๅฎŒๆ•ดๅ›พ้›†๏ผŒไฝœไธบๆ–ฐๆ ผๅผ็š„ๅฎž้ชŒใ€‚ๅœจ่ฟ™ไธชๆ–ฐๆ–นๅ‘ไธญ๏ผŒๆ•…ไบ‹็š„้‡็‚นๅฐ†ๆ˜ฏๅฏน่ฏ๏ผŒๆ‰€ไปฅๅ›พๅƒๅฏ่ƒฝไธๅƒไปฅๅ‰้‚ฃ็งๆ— ๅฃฐๅ›พ้‚ฃๆ ทๆœ‰ๆก็†๏ผŒ่ฟ™ๆ˜ฏไธ€ไธชๅฐๆ้†’ๅ–”๏ผ

ๆฏๅฅ—ไฝœๅ“็›ฎๅ‰่ฟ˜ๆ˜ฏไผšๆญ้…ๅฎŒๆ•ดๆ’ๅ›พ็š„๏ฝžไธ่ฟ‡ๅฆ‚ๆžœ่ฟ™ไธชๆ–ฐๅฝขๅผ้กบๅˆฉ๏ผŒไนŸ่ฎธๆœชๆฅไธไผšไธบๆฏไธ€ๅฅ—้ƒฝ็”ปๆ’ๅ›พใ€‚

ๅฆๅค–๏ผๅชๆœ‰ๆˆ‘็†Ÿๆ‚‰็š„่ง’่‰ฒๆˆ‘ๆ‰ไผšๅ†™ๅฏน่ฏๅ“ฆ๏ฝž
ไฝ†ๅˆซๆ‹…ๅฟƒ๏ผŒๆˆ‘่ฟ˜ๆ˜ฏไผš็ปง็ปญๆŽฅ็‚นๅ›พ็š„๏ผ๐Ÿฅฐ

ๅŒๆ—ถ๏ผŒๆˆ‘ไนŸไผšๅŠชๅŠ›ๆๅ‡ๅˆ†้•œ่กจ็Žฐใ€ๆ•…ไบ‹่Š‚ๅฅ๏ผŒ่ฟ˜ๆœ‰ๅฏน่ฏๆก†็š„ไฝฟ็”จๆ–นๅผ๏ผๆ…ขๆ…ข่ฟ›ๆญฅไธญ๏ผ

่ฟ™ๅชๆ˜ฏไธ€ๆฌกๅฐ่ฏ•๏ผŒ็œ‹็œ‹้•ฟๆœŸไธ‹ๆฅไผšไธไผš้€‚ๅˆๆˆ‘โ€ฆ๏ผˆ็ดงๅผ ็ฌ‘๏ผ‰

ๆฌข่ฟŽๅœจ่ฏ„่ฎบๅŒบๅ‘Š่ฏ‰ๆˆ‘ไฝ ็š„ๆƒณๆณ•๏ผๆˆ‘็œŸ็š„ๅพˆๆƒณๅฌๅฌๅคงๅฎถ็š„ๆ„่ง ๐Ÿ’ฌโค๏ธ

๐Ÿ‡ฏ๐Ÿ‡ต Japanese

ใฟใ‚“ใชใ“ใ‚“ใซใกใฏ๏ผ
ใŠ็Ÿฅใ‚‰ใ›ใงใ™๏ฝž๏ผใ“ใ‚Œใ‹ใ‚‰ใ—ใฐใ‚‰ใใฏใ€ใ‚ปใƒชใƒ•ไป˜ใ๏ผ†ๅŒไบบ่ชŒ้ขจใฎไฝœๅ“ใ‚’ๅฎŸ้จ“็š„ใซไฝœใฃใฆใ„ใ“ใ†ใจๆ€ใ„ใพใ™๏ผ๐Ÿ’ฌโœจ
ใใฎๅˆ†ใ€ๆŠ•็จฟใฎใƒšใƒผใ‚นใฏใกใ‚‡ใฃใจใ‚†ใฃใใ‚Šใซใชใ‚‹ใ‹ใ‚‚ใงใ™ใŒใ€ใ‚‚ใฃใจใƒฌใƒ™ใƒซใ‚ขใƒƒใƒ—ใ—ใŸไฝœๅ“ใ‚’็›ฎๆŒ‡ใ—ใŸใ„ใจๆ€ใฃใฆใพใ™๏ผ

ใจใ‚Šใ‚ใˆใšไปŠใฏใŠใพใ‘ๅฝขๅผใงใƒ•ใƒซใ‚ปใƒƒใƒˆใ‚’ๆŠ•็จฟใ—ใฆใ„ใใพใ™๏ฝž
ไปŠๅ›žใฎ่ฉฆใฟใงใฏใ€็‰ฉ่ชžใฎไธญๅฟƒใŒใ€Œใ‚ปใƒชใƒ•ใƒปไผš่ฉฑใ€ใซใชใ‚‹ใฎใงใ€ไปŠใพใงใฎ็„ก้Ÿณใ‚ปใƒƒใƒˆใฎใ‚ˆใ†ใซ็”ปๅƒใŒๅฎŒๅ…จใซ็น‹ใŒใฃใฆใ‚‹ใจใฏ้™ใ‚‰ใชใ„ใงใ™ใ€‚ใ”ไบ†ๆ‰ฟใใ ใ•ใ„๐Ÿ™

ใ—ใฐใ‚‰ใใฏใƒ•ใƒซใ‚คใƒฉใ‚นใƒˆไป˜ใใงๅ‡บใ—ใพใ™ใŒใ€ใ‚‚ใ—ใ“ใฎๅฝขๅผใŒใ†ใพใใ„ใ‘ใฐใ€ไปŠๅพŒใฏๆฏŽๅ›žใ‚คใƒฉใ‚นใƒˆใ‚’ๆใ‹ใชใ„ใ“ใจใ‚‚ใ‚ใ‚‹ใ‹ใ‚‚ใงใ™ใ€‚

ใ‚ใจใ€ใ‚ปใƒชใƒ•ใฏ็งใŒใ‚ˆใ็Ÿฅใฃใฆใ‚‹ใ‚ญใƒฃใƒฉใซ้™ใฃใฆๆ›ธใไบˆๅฎšใชใฎใงใ€
ใงใ‚‚ใงใ‚‚๏ผใƒชใ‚ฏใ‚จใ‚นใƒˆใฏๅผ•ใ็ถšใๅ—ใ‘ไป˜ใ‘ใฆใพใ™ใ‚ˆ๏ฝž๐Ÿฅฐ

ใใ—ใฆใ€ใ‚ณใƒžๅ‰ฒใ‚Šใƒปใ‚นใƒˆใƒผใƒชใƒผใƒ†ใƒชใƒณใ‚ฐใƒปๅนใๅ‡บใ—ใฎไฝฟใ„ๆ–นใ‚‚ใ‚‚ใฃใจไธŠ้”ใงใใ‚‹ใ‚ˆใ†้ ‘ๅผตใ‚Šใพใ™๏ผๆˆ้•ทไธญ๏ผ

ใพใšใฏๅฎŸ้จ“็š„ใซใ‚„ใฃใฆใฟใฆใ€ไปŠๅพŒใฉใ†ใชใ‚‹ใ‹โ€ฆใฃใฆๆ„Ÿใ˜ใงใ™๏ผ๏ผˆใƒ‰ใ‚ญใƒ‰ใ‚ญใฎ็ฌ‘้ก”๏ผ‰

ใœใฒใ‚ณใƒกใƒณใƒˆใงๆ„Ÿๆƒณใ‚„ๆ„่ฆ‹ใ‚’ๆ•™ใˆใฆใใ ใ•ใ„๏ผใƒ•ใ‚ฃใƒผใƒ‰ใƒใƒƒใ‚ฏใ‚‚ใ‚‰ใˆใ‚‹ใจๅฌ‰ใ—ใ„ใงใ™ ๐Ÿ’ฌโค๏ธ

๐Ÿ‡ฐ๐Ÿ‡ท Korean

์•ˆ๋…•ํ•˜์„ธ์š” ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„~
์•ž์œผ๋กœ๋Š” ๋Œ€์‚ฌ๊ฐ€ ํฌํ•จ๋œ ๋™์ธ์ง€ ์Šคํƒ€์ผ์˜ ์ž‘ํ’ˆ์„ ์‹คํ—˜ํ•ด๋ณด๋ ค๊ณ  ํ•ด์š”! ๐Ÿ’ฌโœจ
๊ทธ๋งŒํผ ์—…๋ฐ์ดํŠธ ์†๋„๋Š” ์กฐ๊ธˆ ๋А๋ ค์งˆ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์ง€๋งŒ, ์ œ ์ฝ˜ํ…์ธ ๋ฅผ ํ•œ ๋‹จ๊ณ„ ๋” ๋Œ์–ด์˜ฌ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์‹ถ์–ด์š”!

์šฐ์„ ์€ ์ด ์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ํฌ๋งท์„ ํ…Œ์ŠคํŠธํ•˜๋Š” ๋™์•ˆ ์˜ค๋งˆ์ผ€(๋ณด๋„ˆ์Šค) ํ˜•์‹์œผ๋กœ ์ „์ฒด ์„ธํŠธ๋ฅผ ๊ฒŒ์‹œํ• ๊ฒŒ์š”.
์Šคํ† ๋ฆฌํ…”๋ง์ด ๋Œ€์‚ฌ ์ค‘์‹ฌ์ด ๋˜๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์—, ์ด๋ฏธ์ง€ ํ๋ฆ„์ด ๊ธฐ์กด์˜ ๋ฌด์„ฑ ์„ธํŠธ์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ๋งค๋„๋Ÿฝ์ง„ ์•Š์„ ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ์–ด์š”! ๊ทธ ์  ์–‘ํ•ด ๋ถ€ํƒ๋“œ๋ ค์š”~

ํ˜„์žฌ๋กœ์„œ๋Š” ํ’€ ์ผ๋Ÿฌ์ŠคํŠธ๋„ ๊ฐ™์ด ์˜ฌ๋ฆด ์˜ˆ์ •์ด์ง€๋งŒ, ๋งŒ์•ฝ ์ด ํฌ๋งท์ด ์ž˜ ์ž‘๋™ํ•œ๋‹ค๋ฉด
์•ž์œผ๋กœ๋Š” ๋ชจ๋“  ์„ธํŠธ์— ๊ผญ ์ผ๋Ÿฌ์ŠคํŠธ๋ฅผ ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ์ง„ ์•Š์„ ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ์–ด์š”.

๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๋Œ€์‚ฌ๋Š” ์ œ๊ฐ€ ์ž˜ ์•„๋Š” ์บ๋ฆญํ„ฐ์— ํ•œํ•ด์„œ๋งŒ ์“ธ ์˜ˆ์ •์ด์—์š”.
ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ๊ฑฑ์ • ๋งˆ์„ธ์š”! ๋ฆฌํ€˜์ŠคํŠธ๋Š” ์—ฌ์ „ํžˆ ๋ฐ›๊ณ  ์žˆ์–ด์š”~ ๐Ÿฅฐ

๋˜ํ•œ ์•ž์œผ๋กœ๋Š” ์ปท ๊ตฌ์„ฑ, ์Šคํ† ๋ฆฌ ์ „๋‹ฌ, ๋งํ’์„  ์‚ฌ์šฉ๋„ ์ ์  ๋” ๋‚˜์•„์ง€๋„๋ก ๋…ธ๋ ฅํ• ๊ฒŒ์š”! ์ฒœ์ฒœํžˆ ๋ฐฐ์šฐ๋Š” ์ค‘์ด์—์š”!

์ด๊ฑด ์–ด๋””๊นŒ์ง€๋‚˜ ์‹คํ—˜์ด๋‹ˆ๊นŒโ€ฆ ์•ž์œผ๋กœ ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ๋ ์ง€ ์ง€์ผœ๋ณด๋Š” ์ค‘์ด์—์š”! (๊ธด์žฅ๋œ ์›ƒ์Œ)

์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์˜ ์˜๊ฒฌ์ด ๊ถ๊ธˆํ•ด์š”! ๋Œ“๊ธ€๋กœ ํ”ผ๋“œ๋ฐฑ ๊ผญ ๋‚จ๊ฒจ์ฃผ์„ธ์š” ๐Ÿ’ฌโค๏ธ

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Comments

Nice work!Besides,I think you can try to do some yuri content

Dis

it's not working that well unfortunately

Ludy Winterhowl

Maybe you can also use AI to handle dialogue.

HVPS


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